We need to write a short story (80–150 words) in one tight paragraph, with a present-tense
Lead (first sentence as headline): "Thomas Butcher is an English bricklayer who died in an accidental shooting in 1890 in Grant County, New Mexico." Then narrative: "On a Sunday afternoon, Butcher and his partner George Shaffer were returning from a hunt in a buggy when the jolting caused Shaffer's shotgun to discharge both barrels, striking Butcher in the head and killing him instantly [1][2]. Butcher had no relatives in the country and was buried in the Catholic cemetery [2]. He and Shaffer had the contract to lay brick for the Agricultural College [2]." That covers all claims.
On a Sunday afternoon, Butcher and his partner George Shaffer were returning from a hunt when the jolting of their buggy discharged Shaffer's shotgun, blowing away the side of Butcher's head and causing instant death [1][2]. A coroner's jury ruled the death accidental [1]. Butcher, an Englishman with no relations in the country, was buried in the Catholic cemetery [2]. He and Shaffer had the contract to lay brick for the Agricultural College [2]."
On a Sunday afternoon, Butcher and his partner George Shaffer were returning from a hunt when the jolting of their buggy discharged Shaffer's shotgun, blowing away the side of Butcher's head and causing instant death [1][2]. A coroner's jury ruled the death accidental [1]. Butcher, an Englishman with no relations in the country, was buried in the Catholic cemetery [2]. He and Shaffer had the contract to lay brick for the Agricultural College [2].
LEAD: "Thomas Butcher, an English bricklayer, was killed in an accidental shotgun discharge on a Sunday afternoon in 1890 [1][2]." That is a lead sentence.
Sources
- From the Republican (1890)From the Republican Last Sunday afternoon at 5 p. m. as Thomas Butcher and George Shaffer, his partner, were returning from a hunt, the jolting of the buggy they were riding in exploded shells in both barrels …
- Silver City Enterprise — 1888-1890 (full OCR, Internet Archive) — 1890-11-28 (1890)J. D. Lee, the former driver and supposed owner of the Mogollon stage line, who skipped so unceremoniously last week, owes almost everyone in the country. He was a man of very windy ways and the wonder is…